Title: THE SIN EATER'S DAUGHTER
Author: Melinda Salisbury
Pub. Date: February 24, 2015
Publisher: Scholastic Press
Pages: 320
Formats: Paperback, eBook
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Seventeen-year-old Twylla lives in the castle. But although she’s engaged to the prince, Twylla isn’t exactly a member of the court.
She’s the executioner.
As the Goddess embodied, Twylla instantly kills anyone she touches. Each month she’s taken to the prison and forced to lay her hands on those accused of treason. No one will ever love a girl with murder in her veins. Even the prince, whose royal blood supposedly makes him immune to Twylla’s fatal touch, avoids her company.
But then a new guard arrives, a boy whose easy smile belies his deadly swordsmanship. And unlike the others, he’s able to look past Twylla’s executioner robes and see the girl, not the Goddess. Yet Twylla’s been promised to the prince, and knows what happens to people who cross the queen.
However, a treasonous secret is the least of Twylla’s problems. The queen has a plan to destroy her enemies, a plan that requires a stomach-churning, unthinkable sacrifice. Will Twylla do what it takes to protect her kingdom? Or will she abandon her duty in favor of a doomed love?
Now on to the special scene!
It feels like cheating to hunt with the dogs. It’s hardly fair on the stag we’re chasing. I haven’t seen it in some time - we’re following way behind the mutts, thank the Gods - but when we first spotted it, I saw the fury in its eyes, the sheer, disbelieving arrogance that we would dare hunt it, before panic took over and it turned tail and ran. It stood as tall as me, its antlers double that, maned and proud before we forced it to flee. The king of the forest knew it was out of time and it hated us for it.
Merek’s return to life at
court.
It feels like cheating to hunt with the dogs. It’s hardly fair on the stag we’re chasing. I haven’t seen it in some time - we’re following way behind the mutts, thank the Gods - but when we first spotted it, I saw the fury in its eyes, the sheer, disbelieving arrogance that we would dare hunt it, before panic took over and it turned tail and ran. It stood as tall as me, its antlers double that, maned and proud before we forced it to flee. The king of the forest knew it was out of time and it hated us for it.
To be quite
honest, the entire hunt feels utterly pointless. We’re not hunting, we’re
following some diabolical hounds through a wood so they can tear a creature
apart as we watch. There’s no skill needed, no honour here. Still, it’s better
than the ball she’d wanted. I feel the corners of my mouth turn down at the
thought of my mother and I pull them straight. It’ll be over soon enough and
that poor beast will die a violent death so I might be spared other agonies.
From somewhere
ahead, hidden from sight by the trees and shrubs, the stag screams and a chill
runs down my spine. It doesn’t seem just for an animal like that to meet its
death at the teeth of my mother’s monsters. It deserves more. I meet the gaze
of Taul, one of my guards. For a moment we are united in our distaste for this
performance; I know his grim disapproval
matches mine. Then the sound of hooves pounding the forest floor and I take a
deep breath, spurring my own mount on, Taul doing the same behind me.
The carcass is
a mess when we arrive, the ground smeared with blood and the hounds snarling
and snapping at each other, competing for the meat. Already one of the smaller
ones is curled on the floor, motionless. The Master of the Hounds is trying
desperately to tempt them away so he can saw the antlers off, but even with his
spear driving them back he cannot get close. We all sit on our horses in a
semi-circle around the scene, everyone watching in grim fascination, Lord
Bennel sipping from a small flask in what he clearly thinks is a subtle
fashion. I can feel my step-father’s gaze on me, his face flushed and happy. I
keep my own eyes down. There’s so much red.
Eventually, we
turn the horses away and the largest hounds begin to drag the stag after us.
The men laugh and joke as we head towards the feast, but I hold back, riding in
silence. Behind my ribs my heart starts to speed up, I feel a sweat break out
beneath my tunic. This is the part I’ve been longing for and dreading in equal
measure.
I spot her
immediately when we enter the clearing, her hair shining like fire, orange and copper. The
first time I saw her that’s what I thought; that she was somehow made of fire.
She’d glowed with it. But she’s dulled now, I see as I move to sit opposite
her. Her shoulders slump, her eyes cast down. I look to my mother, feeling my
jaw tighten.
“Good sport?” she asks my step-father as he pulls his goblet towards
him.
“Indeed, indeed,” he replies. “We were
led a pretty chase by a devil of a beast – his antlers must have been twice the
height of Merek.” He nods at me and I incline my head. “But we brought him down
and the dogs had their day.”
I raise an eyebrow. We certainly did
not bring him down;
we were all in
the forest when the beast was killed. I look at Twylla to see what she makes of
this, but she is staring at the table, wincing involuntarily at every crack of
bone.
I turn to my mother when she addresses
me. “Merek, how did you find it?”
“Very well, Mother,” I try to keep a
sneer from my voice, leaning away. “It was a pleasant distraction. I would do
it again.” I should stop there, I know I should, but I can’t resist the chance
to annoy her. A small rebellion. But we all must begin somewhere. “While we
were in Tregellan we hunted boar on occasion. Though not a court they still
enjoy some of the old sports and courtly pastimes.”
“I’m surprised they find time,” she
says, her eyes darkening. “I was under the impression it took them the best
part of a moon to agree to any decision.”
It’s almost impossible to prevent
myself from smirking as she takes the bait. “True. But that’s the price of
democracy, I expect. Each voice needs to be heard. Whilst it could be more
efficient, I can’t deny the system works. For them, at least.”
“For them.” There is a threat in her
voice and I look away before she can see the rage her dismissal births in me. I
cannot recall ever loving her, but since my return two days ago I’ve realized
how much I dislike her. I cannot bear to be near her. My own mother.
She can sense there is something wrong and works to placate me. “The
Hall of Glass will be complete soon. We’ve modelled it on the original in
Tallith. There are pastimes enough to be found here too.”
“I saw the remains of the original
whilst I was there. I’m sure it was quite something. In its day.”
“I think you’ll find our version will supersede it. Whilst modelled on
the Tallithi design, I’ve made some modifications to it myself. It’s no relic.”
“It won’t be the same as a
tourney or a sport though, will it?”
“It’s a more refined entertainment.”
Her voice is intimate, inviting, and my skin crawls. “We’re not savages like
the Tregellians. We can take our
pleasure from more gentle things.”
Gentle? Like her hounds? Like her mercy? Spare me. But before I can
reply she continues.
“My son, the traveller. I only hope Lormere has enough to occupy him
now.” She smiles at me and reaches for my hand. Without thinking I move,
grabbing my knife and stabbing it into the bird in front of me. Aware the
entire court is watching, and knowing I’ll pay for it later, I tear a chunk of
meat from it and chew, keeping my eyes on hers until she looks away, fury
burning there.
It was worth it, I think, when I catch
Twylla looking away from me, her eyes curious. If it gave her even a moment’s
amusement then it’s worth whatever punishment my mother metes out later.
She pulls a necklace from her gown and
toys with it as she scours the table and after a moment I realise what is
hanging from it and put the bird down.
“You made it into a necklace?”
She looks at the coin which now
dangles from a long thick chain. “I could hardly add it to the treasury.”
For some reason my eyes sting as
though I might cry. “Where did the design go? The piper and the stars that were
on the front? Did you have them filed away?”
“Of course I did. What reason would I
have for wanting to wear an old coin with a Tallithi musician on? This is much
better. See, now the centre is unmarked and it looks like Næht’s moon. And the
gold around the edge is Dæg’s sun. I’ve made it Lormerian.”
I stare at her in disbelief. “That was
possibly the last alchemy-made Tallithi coin in the world. Over five hundred
harvests old, a priceless piece of history.”
“But not our history, Merek. I’m only
concerned with our history. Besides, it’s not as if it will tell us the secrets
of alchemy, is it? It’s merely a useless coin from an obsolete currency.”
I’m struck dumb by the callousness of
it, by the stupidity of it. It was ancient. I hadn’t even planned to give it to
her; she saw it by my bed and assumed it was for her. I found it by sheer dumb
luck, at the bottom of a cliff. It must have been there since before the fall,
the last remnant of civilization. Utterly invaluable and she made it into a
bauble.
Lord Bennel, drunk and reeling breaks
my chain of thought. “Did you find the Sleeping Prince, Your Highness?”
Some of the court laughs and I welcome the break in the tension, about
to make a joke when I see my mother’s face. If looks could kill then Lord
Bennel would surely be dead now; there is nothing less than murder in my
mother’s eyes. Everyone can see it, the entire company is frozen, watching.
“Forgive me, Your Majesties, and Your
Highness,” Lord Bennel says hurriedly, his words slurring together in his haste
to speak them. “I did not mean to interrupt you.”
Mother says nothing, I say nothing,
clamping my jaw shut, the familiar feeling of fear taking over. When she leans
back they all take a collective breath and the party begins again. But it’s not
over. We are in the eye of her storm, I realise.
“Twylla, you will sing now,” she snaps at my betrothed, who jumps out of
her seat and walks to the end of the table. I watch her all the way, taking in
her figure, her red dress, her unbound hair and I see in the way she walks that
she’s terrified. She knows it too.
I watch her sing, watch the way her
eyes focus on a spot beyond us, above us, watch as her shoulders lose some of
their stiffness every second that goes past and the axe does not fall. Her
voice is even lovelier than I remember, and I feel my own face relaxing as I
watch her, feel my lips pulling into a smile. I have missed nothing about
Lormere at all over the past two harvests, save for this. Save for her. In the
dappled light through the canopy her hair shines, her eyes gleam the same green
as the leaves behind her. When we are wed I shall have her sing to me every
night before we sleep. I shall let her sing all day if she wishes.
Then her gaze changes, her shoulders
stiffen again and her face pales. I look around for the cause of it and see
Lord Bennel whispering at Lady Lorelle. At the head of the table Twylla is
tossing her hair back, gesturing wildly with her hands and I realise she’s
trying to keep our attention on her. She’s trying to save him.
But it’s futile, beside me my mother
has gone as still as a snake, her knuckles whitening on the stem of her goblet.
I’m possibly the only person
unsurprised by the flash of motion and the shattering glass, I saw an instant
before she did it what she meant to do.
“Does Twylla bore you, Lord Bennel?
Does Daunen Embodied bore my lord?”
Bennel reddens and leans towards her.
“Forgive me, Your Majesty, I was merely saying to Lady Lorelle how lucky
we were to live in such times, to have Daunen Embodied amongst us once more. I
meant it to be a compliment.” He gestures at Twylla and in the process knocks
his wine glass down. Beside him Lady Lorelle closes her eyes and swallows.
“Odd. Surely a better compliment would have been simply to listen to her
and appreciate her, as the rest of us were managing to do. Lorelle didn’t seem
to have a problem appreciating the song without talking over it, did she?”
“No, Your Majesty.” His response is a beat too slow.
“Perhaps your compliments, as you say, were ill-timed then?”
“Yes, Your Majesty.”
“Perhaps you’d do better to leave us to enjoy the gifts of the Gods
without you?”
I look at my step-father and he speaks, only managing to say her name
softly before she cuts him off. He looks at me and frowns, before turning away
completely.
“I – Your Majesty?” says Lord Bennel.
“Go. You interrupt Daunen Embodied with your chatter and you interrupted
a private conversation between me and my son with nonsense. Do not aspire to be
in my company until you have learned some manners.” She tosses the broken glass
to the floor, watching him from the corner of her eye and she pretends to
ignore him and my stomach roils at the cruelty of it. As soon as he calls for
his horse, she strikes.
“I think not, Lord Bennel. You may walk and use the time to reflect on
your ignorance.”
He still doesn’t fully understand. Somewhere at the edges of
consciousness he knows – like the stag this morning – that something is deeply
wrong, but he’s too drunk to see it. I hope he is so very drunk he doesn’t feel
a thing. This is partly my fault, I shouldn’t have goaded her earlier, I should
have been the dutiful son she wanted me to be. Had I been sweeter, she might
have been too. I look again at Twylla and see she understands what will happen
next too.
At my mother’s instruction Twylla begins to sing and I want so very much
to thrust my glass into my mother’s face. Twylla’s voice is shaking, as are her
hands and I want to take her from this Gods-cursed place.
My mother summons the Master of the Hounds and I close my eyes, focusing
on Twylla’s voice.
They fly open at Lord Bennel’s scream. No one looks at anyone else, the
injustice and horror paralyzing all of us. Paralyzing me. Who did nothing to
stop it. Said nothing. I saw it all coming and I let it. Even my future bride,
dying by degrees so very clearly, tried to do something.
“Start again, Twylla,” my mother says. “I could hardly hear you over the
wildlife. Though less of the theatrics this time, if you please. You’re Daunen
Embodied, not a village minstrel.”
I look at Twylla in time to see the hatred flash over her face before
she does as she’s told. Her voice is steady now, powerful and I feel a sudden
rush of blinding admiration for her. I cannot take my eyes from her, not while
she sings, not when she returns to her seat, not when she toys with her food.
She tried to save him. My mother hasn’t extinguished her yet.
I can feel my mother watching me, watch her and I know I should look
away but I can’t. There is still fire in her. And if she can fight, then I can
fight. We can fight together. She will be the spark that starts the fire to
purge Lormere of the madness of my mother.
Throughout the ride home I try and work up the nerve to drop back and
talk to her, but never summon the courage. I’m not as brave as she. Instead I
keep my eyes forward, watching the castle loom closer. My mother throws herself
from her horse and marches up the stairs, scattering everyone in her way. My
step-father and I follow, but before I go inside I turn and there she is,
dismounting.
Our eyes meet and in that moment the whole word ceases to exist, there
is just her, blazing in the afternoon sun. My mother calls me and I turn away
automatically. But I have an idea.
Thanks so much Melinda for this scene! I love Prince Merek!!!!
About Melinda:
Melinda Salisbury lives by the sea, somewhere in the south of
England. As a child she genuinely thought Roald Dahl’s Matilda was
her biography, in part helped by her grandfather often mistakenly calling her
Matilda, and the local library having a pretty cavalier attitude to the books
she borrowed. Sadly she never manifested telekinetic powers. She likes to
travel, and have adventures. She also likes medieval castles, non-medieval
aquariums, Richard III, and all things Scandinavian. The Sin Eater’s Daughter
is her first novel, and will be published by Scholastic in 2015. She is
represented by the amazing Claire Wilson at Rogers, Coleridge and White.
She tweets. A lot.
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